Topic sentence優良作品分享！(1)

抱歉週報越改越慢呀，唉唉～
因為草創時期都要寫好多評語，
讓你們明白為什麼我覺得某些地方不夠好，
希望你們能慢慢懂我的意思，
如果拿到自己週報還是看不懂的人一定要來找我。謝謝！

接下來我會定期提供優良的作品讓大家欣賞兼學習，
期望大家耳濡目染，越變越強！

Example 1    206黃惠婷

Story: The Little Prince Chapter 3

Afterthoughts:

In this chapter, I think the little prince becomes much more mysterious than before.  First, the little prince  is questionned by the narrator if he is from another planet rather than the world the narrator knows.  Secondly, he feels sad in the end of the chapter which makes me wonder what he is grieving about.  So based the above-mentioned, I find the prince very intriguing because hard as the narrator and I try, we still haven't resolved the mystery behind the little prince so far.

Example 2   206林芷吟

Article: Dolphin killing in Japan

Afterthoughts:

Although I love Japan, I still think it very cruel to kill dolphins and I need to do something.  It's hard for me to imagine the scene that the lovely animal becomes a part of our meals.  Besides, from my memory, the Japanese also eat bears and deers.  It is really disgusting.  So, I signed up the campain and I decided to post these articles on my Japanese blog.  In this way, more people will notice the secret of Taiji and refuse to eat the dolphins.

Example 3   206林佳蓉

Novel: Twilight

Afterthoughts:

Though Bella came from Phoenix, she was not like those who are from there at all.  First, Phoevix was differnt from Foks, where sunshine was everywhere and people full of energy to play all kinds of sports.  However, Bella was different.  She didn't like exercise because she was not capable of anything of the sort at all.  On top of that, Bella's skin colr was also not like others--it was so white.  Yet, maybe these differences were her charms.

Example 4    206徐棻穗

Article: Length of Fingers Can Predict Math and Verbal Skills

Afterthoughts:

Efforts are important, but inborn factors may influence a lot too.  After reading this article, I took a close examination on my ring and index finger and found that my index finger was much longer.  Indeed, as the article suggests, my math is not so good.  What an interesting study.  However, in my opinion, despite the fact, I still want to do my best on my weakness and rise above my difficulties.